moment in time
Place: In a town.
People: There are three people there in the town.
Feeling: The 3 people are trying to feel calm.
Activity: One person is pulling a raft with a rope and the 2 other people are sitting on the raft.
What is happening: The 3 people are on something and floating across the flood water.
Problem: There is a flood and the 3 people don’t have a big enuf raft thing to fit onto the raft thingy.
Solution to the problem: They could buy or get a bigger raft thingy so that everyone could float on it.
What shape the raft is: It is a circle with a hole in the middle of it like a donut.
What colour is the raft and the water: The raft is a dark blue raft with some black on the bottom of the raft. And the water is a light brown colour, it is not light blue or dark blue like normal water.
Walt:
describe a moment in time - 1st attempt
