Tuesday, April 10, 2018

Ron description

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Sam my name is Te Aroha and I am a year 8 at Kawakawa Primary School. Your description on Ron was good. Maybe more descriptive words or higher level vocab could help make this writing just a bit better. Ron weasley is my favourite Harry Potter character. Do you have a favourite Harry Potter character? Nice job on this description. Keep up the good work :)

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    1. Thank you so much and my Favorite person in the movie Harry Potter is indeed Ron weasley that's why i put him in it. Thank you for the feedback :-)

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